I like the presentation. I feel that your topic is very clearly stated. However, I'm not sure I understand what your position on the topic is. I imagine it is the importance of collaboration for art's sake, but I might not have gotten that from the presentation alone. I feel like your graphics are very clear and fitting with what you are discussing. I do feel the slide background is a bit distracting. Overall, you might want to add a slide about the value of music, I feel like the concept is hinted at through the whole, but never actually stated.
I like the presentation. I feel that your topic is very clearly stated. However, I'm not sure I understand what your position on the topic is. I imagine it is the importance of collaboration for art's sake, but I might not have gotten that from the presentation alone. I feel like your graphics are very clear and fitting with what you are discussing. I do feel the slide background is a bit distracting. Overall, you might want to add a slide about the value of music, I feel like the concept is hinted at through the whole, but never actually stated.
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